She looked deep into the eyes,
Of the man as he lay.
His heart kept on pumping,
Still beating its way.
His breath was quite ragged,
Still trying to hang on.
As his life tried to rally,
And then he was gone.
Slowly she rose,
The knife in her hand.
She looked at the ground,
It was not as was planned.
He should not have laughed,
He should not have lied.
He should now be thankful,
Only the radio died.
Yikes! The twist
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Hee Hee Hee
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So that’s how you turn the radio off Pam 😂 🤣
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It works… well, once.
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Pam, it’s brilliant! I saw a future Dateline mystery episode at first!
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My wicked sense of humour…
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And I love it!
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Beautiful twist😊
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Thank you Saji
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My Twisted Sister, you did it again. I should know better by now, but you caught me again. Well done! You are the Master of Twists. Chubby Checker would have lost any “twist” contest against you! 🤗
Ginger
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Ha ha ha! But Chubby did have those hips!
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Excellent twist (in the story and in your sense of humor). I join the others in being caught.
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I do love to go fishing…
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There’s a little Pam brat in there 😉
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Twist and turns – plus a bit out of character – but your twinkle shined through with a wry smile. Well done, Pam!
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Ha! Thanks Frank.
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Plenty of food for thought there, Pam!
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Thanks Joy!
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What a twist, Pamela.
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Glad you liked it John.
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😁
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And all this time I thought Video killed the radio star!
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I had forgotten that song! I loved it!
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Happy to oblige.
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That was such a twist, I had to go back and read it again! Well done, you!
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I am so pleased you enjoyed it!
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Very much so!
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This was awesome, Pam. As others have said, that was some twist! Love!
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Glad you liked it!
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